to go for 20 euros to go with your purchase

French translation: souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat pour atteindre les 20 euros?

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English term or phrase:to go for 20 euros to go with your purchase
French translation:souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat pour atteindre les 20 euros?
Entered by: Willa95

08:01 Feb 15, 2019
English to French translations [PRO]
Marketing - Cosmetics, Beauty
English term or phrase: to go for 20 euros to go with your purchase
Bonjour à tous,

Il s'agit ici de l'objectif hebdomadaire de vendeuses en parfumerie (vente incitative).

"Selling speech:
“You’re only 10 euros away from getting a complementary gift, would you like to add on a small fragrance to go for 20 euros to go with your purchase?"
"« Il ne vous manque plus que 10 euros et vous pourrez obtenir un cadeau gratuit, souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat et atteindre les 20 euros ?"

J'ai un doute sur le sens final de la phrase "to go for 20 euros to go with your purchase". L'idée est-elle rendue ici ?

Merci
Willa95
France
Local time: 08:23
souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat pour atteindre les 20 euros?
Explanation:
Le sense c'est justement d'atteindre cette somme en achetant un petit parfum.
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Vanessa Garde
Italy
Local time: 08:23
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Summary of answers provided
4 +3pour atteindre 20 euros et accompagner votre achat
FX Fraipont (X)
4 +2souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat pour atteindre les 20 euros?
Vanessa Garde
4souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat sans dépasser les 20 euros
GILOU


Discussion entries: 5





  

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5 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +3
pour atteindre 20 euros et accompagner votre achat


Explanation:
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FX Fraipont (X)
Belgium
Local time: 08:23
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 159

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Tony M: The EN is indeed poorly written; the idea of 'to go for' is rather 'pour essayer d'atteindre' — but it's rather a spurious thing to say in the first place!
30 mins

agree  B D Finch: Agree with comments by others about the very poor English. Though, it could be a transcription of actual speech.
3 hrs

agree  Véronique V.Varela: The EN indeed is very poor... I agree with the colleagues.
3 days 5 hrs
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57 mins   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5
souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat sans dépasser les 20 euros


Explanation:
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Note added at 57 minutes (2019-02-15 08:59:08 GMT)
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Je suis d'accord avec votre phrase en la modifiant un peu

GILOU
France
Local time: 08:23
Native speaker of: French
PRO pts in category: 192
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12 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +2
souhaitez-vous ajouter un petit parfum à votre achat pour atteindre les 20 euros?


Explanation:
Le sense c'est justement d'atteindre cette somme en achetant un petit parfum.

Vanessa Garde
Italy
Local time: 08:23
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 4

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Tony M
31 mins

agree  Johanne Dupuy
2 days 14 hrs
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