12:42 Sep 20, 2014 |
Japanese to English translations [PRO] Medical - Medical: Health Care / nursing | |||||||
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3 | display a confident, caring demeanor |
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3 | deal with patients with patience and sincerity |
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3 | an attitude of relentless dedication to... |
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display a confident, caring demeanor Explanation: I think you have a lot of leeway with this but here are my suggestions: "approach the patient with an attitude of sincerity and determination" "maintain a confident and professional attitude" "display a confident, caring demeanor" "use caring but professional body language" |
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deal with patients with patience and sincerity Explanation: 「粘り強く」はpatience、「真摯」はsincerity でしょうか。 向かい合う姿勢は、display や show でも良いでしょうね。The nurse shows/displays patience and sincerity to patients. |
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an attitude of relentless dedication to... Explanation: some very good suggestions so far,... Here is one more option for consideration. If translating closer to the original, as done below, adding 'clinical' or equivalent might be wise to confine the reference to patient's needs to the most immediate and relevant to their current condition, its seems to me. -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day19 hrs (2014-09-22 07:54:50 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- Oops! sorry for this typo: "patients" not "patients' " -------------------------------------------------- Note added at 1 day19 hrs (2014-09-22 08:22:38 GMT) -------------------------------------------------- No! one dissonance in my offering: "relentless" does not suit this context of 'dedication'. It would, only if that 'dedication' was 'inflicted' to patients who, for some reason, only dream to see the the last of it. Should have been "constant dedication'. Apologies. :-) Example sentence(s):
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