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Imagine dining in a European capital where you do not know the local language. The waiter speaks little English, but by hook or by crook you manage to order something on the menu that you recognise, eat and pay for. Now picture instead that, after a hike goes wrong, you emerge, starving, in an Amazonian village. The people there have no idea what to make of you. You mime chewing sounds, which they mistake for your primitive tongue. When you raise your hands to signify surrender, they think you are launching an attack.

Communicating without a shared context is hard. For example, radioactive sites must be left undisturbed for tens of thousands of years; yet, given that the English of just 1,000 years ago is now unintelligible to most of its modern speakers, agencies have struggled to create warnings to accompany nuclear waste. Committees responsible for doing so have come up with everything from towering concrete spikes, to Edvard Munch’s “The Scream”, to plants genetically modified to turn an alarming blue. None is guaranteed to be future-proof.

Some of the same people who worked on these waste-site messages have also been part of an even bigger challenge: communicating with extraterrestrial life. This is the subject of “Extraterrestrial Languages”, a new book by Daniel Oberhaus, a journalist at Wired.

Nothing is known about how extraterrestrials might take in information. A pair of plaques sent in the early 1970s with Pioneer 10 and 11, two spacecraft, show nude human beings and a rough map to find Earth—rudimentary stuff, but even that assumes aliens can see. Since such craft have no more than an infinitesimal chance of being found, radio broadcasts from Earth, travelling at the speed of light, are more likely to make contact. But just as a terrestrial radio must be tuned to the right frequency, so must the interstellar kind. How would aliens happen upon the correct one? The Pioneer plaque gives a hint in the form of a basic diagram of a hydrogen atom, the magnetic polarity of which flips at regular intervals, with a frequency of 1,420MHz. Since hydrogen is the most abundant element in the universe, the hope is that this sketch might act as a sort of telephone number.

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pour eux, c’est un assaut que vous lancez
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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au commun des anglophones
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
mises en garde
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bonne alte​rnative
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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Certes rien de bien sorcier
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Catherine Meunier
ça se règle
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
de diagramme simple de l’atome d’hydrogène
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Sara Massons
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Lea Golder-Laude (X)
Lea Golder-Laude (X)
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dont vous ne connaissez pas la langue
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Sara Massons
à force de persévérance
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Sara Massons
À présent,
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Sara Massons
en signe de reddition
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Sara Massons
hors d’un cadre partagé
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Sara Massons
demeurer tels quels
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Sara Massons
Aucun n’est garanti face à l’épreuve du temps
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
capter l’information
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Sara Massons
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communiquer avec la vie extraterrestre
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Catherine Meunier
il en va de même pour les radios interstellaires.
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
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ne parle que vaguement l’anglais
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Sara Massons
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que vous vous exprimez dans une langue primitive
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Sara Massons
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Très bonne​ idée le p​oint-virgu​le ici et ​dans la ph​rase précé​dente. Cel​a coule à ​la lecture
Emilie Himeur, Ph.D.
L’absence d’un contexte commun rend la communication difficile.
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Belle phra​se.
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
inintelligible
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
contemporains
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Sara Massons
de la construction d’imposantes pointes en béton
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Sara Massons
les zones de stockage de déchets nucléaires
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Sara Massons
C’est le sujet du nouveau livre « Extraterrestrial Languages » (« Langues extraterrestres ») de Daniel Oberhaus,
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
Comment les extraterrestres percevraient-ils nos informations
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Sara Massons
soient dotés du sens de la vue
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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Maintenant, figurez-vous qu’à l’issue d’une randonnée qui tourne mal,
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Josianne Brice PEGNA BOGNO
Les autochtones
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Josianne Brice PEGNA BOGNO
pour baliser
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Sara Massons
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Comment les extra-terrestres interprèteraient une information… nul n’en sait rien.
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Emilie Himeur, Ph.D.
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vaille que vaille
Good term selection
John Vandenhaute
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quand on ne partage aucun cadre commun
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
se sont également attelées à un défi
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
croquis
Good term selection
Catherine Meunier
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vous vous débrouillez d'une manière ou d'une autre
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
que personne ne s'introduise
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Sara Massons
ont eu du mal à créer
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Catherine Meunier
des plantes d'un bleu inquiétant obtenues par modification génétique
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Sara Massons
soient doués de vision.
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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chargés de
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plutôt que​ l'anglici​sme "en ch​arge de"
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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Vous ne maitrisez pas la langue du pays et le serveur ne parle qu'un anglais approximatif.
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J'aime bie​n le rythm​e et la lo​gique donn​és par la ​restructur​ation des ​phrases. B​elle entré​e en matiè​re
Emilie Himeur, Ph.D.
Ne renonçant devant rien
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Sara Massons
plat qui vous semble familier
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Sara Massons
vous ouvrez les hostilités
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original
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
un millénaire
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
Aucune de ces inventions ne présente toutefois la garantie d’être à l’épreuve du temps
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
sites d’enfouissement de déchets
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Sara Massons
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en signe de reddition
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
ils pensent que vous vous apprêtez à les attaquer.
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
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vous lancez une offensive
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Sara Massons
commissions compétentes
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Sara Massons
de béton imposants
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Catherine Meunier
susceptibles d'établir un contact
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Sara Massons
comme une sorte de
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Catherine Meunier
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Les organismes chargés de cette tâche
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Catherine Meunier
capter l'information
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Sara Massons
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s'exprime en piètre anglais
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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associés aux
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plutôt qu'​"accompagn​er"
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
pour se teinter d'un bleu angoissant.
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élégant
Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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rien de la perception de l'information
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Sara Massons
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à peine
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Sara Massons
d’une manière ou d’une autre
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Sara Massons
pris à tort
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
pour signifier que vous abandonnez la partie
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
sans références partagées
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
locuteurs modernes
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Catherine Meunier
monolithes
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
rudimentaire
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Sara Massons
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Citons, par exemple,
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Catherine Meunier
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ont eu du fil à retordre
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
agisse en quelque sorte comme
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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à peine anglais
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Isabel Gonçalves Taveira
vous vous débrouillez pour commander, manger et payer
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
un plat du menu qui vous semble familier.
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
en signe de renonciation
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Sara Massons
commissions chargées de cette responsabilité
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Sara Massons
résistantes à l’épreuve du temps
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Catherine Meunier
une avec la sonde Pioneer 10 et une seconde avec la Pioneer 11
Good term selection
Catherine Meunier
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mimez des bruits de mastication
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DANIELE KHORCHI (X)
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commander, manger et payer pour quelque chose que vous reconnaissez sur la carte
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Parfait
Marion Lambert-Nuding
n’est assurée d’être à l’épreuve du temps
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Helene Carrasco-Nabih
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un défi encore plus grand
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Cyril Tollari