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Apr 11, 2014 05:57
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English term

is delivered with the red dot can be rotated

English Tech/Engineering Engineering (general) riflescope
BRIGHTNESS ADJUSTMENT
The Brightness Adjustment Dial on the side of the XXX ***is delivered with the red dot can be rotated*** in either direction to set the red dot to the desired brightness level, based on ambient light conditions, auxiliary equipment, and user preference.

Should it be "is delivered with the red dot AND can be rotated"?

"The red dot" here means "the red dot scope"?
Responses
4 is delivered with the red dot WHICH can be rotated

Discussion

Ana Juliá (asker) Apr 12, 2014:
I aked the client. They told to translate as with a 'which' missing. Thank you all.
claude-andrew Apr 11, 2014:
Ask the client. I've just had two incomplete sentences in one text.
Terry Richards Apr 11, 2014:
Maybe an EXTRA word? It also works if you subtract "is" (although some commas would help).
B D Finch Apr 11, 2014:
Who knows? It might have just one word missing, or a whole phrase e.g.:
* is delivered with the red dot set to the top position, this can be rotated
* is delivered with the red dot in a plastic envelope ready for sticking onto the dial, this can be rotated
* is delivered with the red dot that can be rotated
meirs Apr 11, 2014:
Or missing "that"
Lincoln Hui Apr 11, 2014:
Might be missing an "and".

Responses

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is delivered with the red dot WHICH can be rotated

***is delivered with the red dot WHICH can be rotated*** in either direction

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Note added at 43 mins (2014-04-11 06:41:10 GMT)
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Peer comment(s):
neutral B D Finch : "Which" should be preceded by a comma.
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