Feb 5, 2015 19:19
9 yrs ago
English term

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My hometown is one of the most picturesque in the country. In my experience, I have never visited a city anywhere in this world which compares with my hometown.
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This sentence is from a book for IELTS preparation. Shall it be "a city anywhere in the world which CAN compare with my hometown"?
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Feb 5, 2015 21:00: Sheila Wilson changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

Non-PRO (3): Edith Kelly, Victoria Britten, Sheila Wilson

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Discussion

Yvonne Gallagher Feb 6, 2015:
Lots of ways of saying this better and I would not have this as 2 sentences. Definitely drop "in my experience" and don't repeat "my hometown".
1045 omitted the "visit" and "never" element

Also, "anywhere" =in THE (not "this") world
My hometown is one of the most picturesque in the country and I've never (in my life) been in/visited another city which compares/can compare with it. .
"can compare"= a nuance meaning it's even more unlikely you 'll find a nicer place
Sheila Wilson Feb 6, 2015:
Agree Great improvement: clear, simple and concise. English is always best when the writer adopts the KISS principle.
Jean-Claude Gouin Feb 6, 2015:
I would write ... My hometown is one of the most picturesque in the country. No other city can compare with it.
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This sentence is from a book for IELTS preparation. Shall it be "a city anywhere in the world which CAN compare with my hometown"?

Responses

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The sentences have very slightly different meanings

As you have it, the sentence just says the writer has never found a city that matches it. The version with "can" emphasises that the writer thinks it would be difficult to find one that's able to match it. There is actually very little difference between the two sentences - just a nuance.

However, you don't need both "In my experience" and "I have never". That's really clunky, in my opinion.
Note from asker:
Thank you Sheila!
Peer comment(s):

agree Jacek Kloskowski
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agree AllegroTrans
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agree Phoenix III
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agree B D Finch : Definitely omit "In my experience".
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agree Sery Media (X)
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