Mar 29, 2004 18:26
20 yrs ago
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Spanish term
Spain
Friendly service and always on time.
Native in: English 
Works in: Spanish to English, English to Spanish
phrase
Spanish to English
Other
Law: Contract(s)
Hello. Just wanted opinions about this sentence I translated (into UK English). Any suggestions for improvement?
Banco XXXX
AVALA
Incondicionalmente e irrevocablemente, con renuncia expresa a los beneficios de división, orden y excusión a X y Y ante Z, hasta la suma anteriormente indicada, garantizando la devolución de la cantidad entregada a la Agrupación, directa o indirectamente, por Z...
Bank XXXXX
HEREBY GUARANTEE
to unconditionally, irrevocably and expressly waive all benefits of priority, initiating proceedings against all guarantors or surety to force the creditor to make use of legal remedies against the principal debtor before having recourse against surety to X. and Y against Z, for the amount indicated above and guarantee the repayment of the amount directly or indirectly paid to Z...
Banco XXXX
AVALA
Incondicionalmente e irrevocablemente, con renuncia expresa a los beneficios de división, orden y excusión a X y Y ante Z, hasta la suma anteriormente indicada, garantizando la devolución de la cantidad entregada a la Agrupación, directa o indirectamente, por Z...
Bank XXXXX
HEREBY GUARANTEE
to unconditionally, irrevocably and expressly waive all benefits of priority, initiating proceedings against all guarantors or surety to force the creditor to make use of legal remedies against the principal debtor before having recourse against surety to X. and Y against Z, for the amount indicated above and guarantee the repayment of the amount directly or indirectly paid to Z...
Proposed translations
(English)
| 4 | (abajo) |
Henry Hinds
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| 4 | sounds fine, just add "to" |
neilmac
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| 4 | See explanation. |
Luisa Ramos, CT
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Proposed translations
6 hrs
Henry Hinds
United States
United States
Native in Spanish
&
English
Specializes in field
United States
43 years of Border Experience and fast.
Native in: English 
, Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish, Spanish to English
Related KudoZ points
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2331
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(abajo)
Bank XXXX
DOES HEREBY
Unconditionally and irrevocably guarantee up to the aforementioned amount to X and Y on behalf of Z, with express waiver of the benefits of division, order and exclusion, and does hereby guarantee repayment of the amount directly or indirectly delivered to the Group by Z.
It's not so easy to work in these little boxes. Luisabel asked me to give it a crack, so here's my version.
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Note added at 6 hrs 58 mins (2004-03-30 01:24:20 GMT)
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Since I don\'t know the context, I just put \"Group\"; use whatever is most appropriate.
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Note added at 7 hrs 28 mins (2004-03-30 01:54:43 GMT)
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I might add that this is pure USA, so any resemblance to the language spoken in the UK is merely a coincidence.
DOES HEREBY
Unconditionally and irrevocably guarantee up to the aforementioned amount to X and Y on behalf of Z, with express waiver of the benefits of division, order and exclusion, and does hereby guarantee repayment of the amount directly or indirectly delivered to the Group by Z.
It's not so easy to work in these little boxes. Luisabel asked me to give it a crack, so here's my version.
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Note added at 6 hrs 58 mins (2004-03-30 01:24:20 GMT)
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Since I don\'t know the context, I just put \"Group\"; use whatever is most appropriate.
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Note added at 7 hrs 28 mins (2004-03-30 01:54:43 GMT)
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I might add that this is pure USA, so any resemblance to the language spoken in the UK is merely a coincidence.
4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer.
Comment: "All comments helped but your version was the most concise. Thank you."
4 hrs
sounds fine, just add "to"
Sounds OK to me, perhaps you could add "to" just before "guarantee" ... ;)
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Note added at 4 hrs 12 mins (2004-03-29 22:38:44 GMT)
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\"... and to guarantee ...\" . I\'m not sure why, it justs feels better with the \"to\" ...
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Note added at 4 hrs 12 mins (2004-03-29 22:38:44 GMT)
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\"... and to guarantee ...\" . I\'m not sure why, it justs feels better with the \"to\" ...
5 hrs
Luisa Ramos, CT
United States
United States
Native in Spanish
United States
Healthcare, Education, Human Resources
Native in: Spanish
Works in: English to Spanish
Related KudoZ points
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27
See explanation.
Bank XXX hereby guarantees, unconditionally and irrevocably, with express waiver as to the benefits of division, order, and excussio to X and Y before Z, the reimbursemente/return of the amount directly or indirectly delivered by Z to the Association, up to the amount previously indicated.
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