Glossary entry

German term or phrase:

nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag

English translation:

After a day of sports activities...

Added to glossary by Martin Wenzel
Feb 3, 2009 16:02
15 yrs ago
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German term

nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag

German to English Marketing Tourism & Travel
Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag steht unsere Bio-Sauna mit Ruheraum kostenlos zum Entspannen zur Verfügung.

After a day with lots of sports....is a bit colloquial and I wonder if this can be expressed in a better way...
Change log

Feb 4, 2009 00:14: Marcus Malabad changed "Term asked" from "Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag..." to "Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag"

Feb 4, 2009 13:18: Steffen Walter changed "Level" from "Non-PRO" to "PRO"

Feb 4, 2009 13:18: Steffen Walter changed "Term asked" from "Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag" to "nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag"

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PRO (2): David Moore (X), Courtney Sliwinski

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Discussion

Martin Wenzel (asker) Feb 4, 2009:
I think the "sportlich" needs to be included. The idea is that people come for a holiday, mainly to ski (in the winter)..but they will do other sports in the summer.

I ended up saying: After a day filled with sports activities, which was a combination of what several people had suggested.

Proposed translations

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German term (edited): Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag...
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After a day of sports activities...

OR: After an active day of sports...

Peer comment(s):

agree Kim Metzger
4 mins
agree Bianca Jacobsohn
9 mins
agree David Moore (X) : ...a day of sporting activities
33 mins
agree jccantrell : ... a day filled with sports activities -- another choice.
38 mins
agree Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
16 hrs
disagree Courtney Sliwinski : The original says "sportlich" not Sport- we are dealing with an adjective and not a noun
20 hrs
So why don't you suggest an adjective that fits the context?
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thank you to all of you."
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German term (edited): Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag...

After an active day playing sport

I've rearranged the words slightly but I think this sounds more natural.
Peer comment(s):

agree Helen Shiner : or an active sport-filled day? Yours is better.
2 hrs
agree Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
16 hrs
disagree Courtney Sliwinski : There is no mention in the original that they are playing sports
20 hrs
surely sportlich indicates some kind of sports activity otherwise the source text could have settled on 'nach einem aktiven Tag'
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German term (edited): Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag...

After a day of physical activity/physically active day

There are several ways to say this. Here is just another option.
Peer comment(s):

agree TonyTK : Yes, I think "sport/sports" sounds odd here - particularly if we're talking something like skiing or climbing.
26 mins
I agree! Thanks!
agree Louise Mawbey
27 mins
Thanks!
agree Bianca Jacobsohn : I'd go with "after a physically active day"
28 mins
Thanks!
agree Inge Meinzer
34 mins
Thanks!
disagree David Moore (X) : You can be physically active without necessarily involving yourself in sport...
38 mins
It says "sportlich" not Sport
agree Donal Murphy-Bokern : 'Sport' sometimes just means vigorous physical activity - not just sport as in games etc. in English
1 hr
Thanks!
neutral Helen Shiner : I feel, like David, that this isn't quite right - it loses the 'sport' bit for me./I think you'll find that Martin, who knows the context better than us, says 'sport'.
2 hrs
Once again, it says "sportlich"
agree Rachel Ward
3 hrs
Thanks!
agree Harald Moelzer (medical-translator)
16 hrs
Thanks!
disagree regardless (X) : ""Physical activity" is too all encompassing - "Sport" in German, as "sports activities", implies leisure activity. If there is no suitable adjective for this in English, it is quite acceptable to use a noun phrase that conveys the original meaning.
22 hrs
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German term (edited): Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag...

After an active day

I don't see the need to make it any more complicated than this - the point is to include as many potential "customers" as possible, not exclude them. I would certainly avoid any reference to "sports" - people who go out walking for the day don't see this as engaging in "sport".
Peer comment(s):

agree TonyTK : ... or this one (see above)
1 min
agree Courtney Sliwinski : i like the idea of avoiding the word "sport"
20 hrs
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German term (edited): Nach einem sportlich aktiven Tag...

After a hard day at play...

This suggestion has a good ring to it in English and promotes the idea of pleasure.
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21 hrs

At the end of an active day

I think that "at the end of the day..."sounds better than "after".
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