Jun 13, 2017 20:24
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Spanish term
Peru
Russian-Spanish sworn translator
Native in: Spanish
Works in: Russian to Spanish, French to Spanish, Italian to Spanish, and 5 more.
Se expide el presente diploma que lo acredita como tal
Spanish to English
Bus/Financial
Certificates, Diplomas, Licenses, CVs
Diploma por haber concluido satisfactoriamente...
Se expide el presente diploma que lo acredita como tal
Se expide el presente diploma que lo acredita como tal
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Robert Forstag
United States
United States
Native in English
United States
Translating words, preserving meaning
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, English
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The present diploma [formally] recognizes him as such.
"Se expide el presente diploma" strikes me as redundant.
I assume that "tal" refers to the degree earned (if diploma is from an institution of higher learning) or graduation attained (if diploma is from a secondary school).
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Given Luisa's clarification, I would amend my suggestion to:
The present diploma recognizes his satisfactory completion of this program of study.
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This is the language used in diplomas in the US. Replicating the use of pronouns will produce strange (if not incomprehensible) English here.
I assume that "tal" refers to the degree earned (if diploma is from an institution of higher learning) or graduation attained (if diploma is from a secondary school).
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Given Luisa's clarification, I would amend my suggestion to:
The present diploma recognizes his satisfactory completion of this program of study.
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This is the language used in diplomas in the US. Replicating the use of pronouns will produce strange (if not incomprehensible) English here.
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AllegroTrans
: "This diploma" - not "the present diploma" - which is pure Translationese
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Yes, "this diploma" is perhaps better. Thank you.
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This diploma awarding him this degree is issued
There are a few ways to translate diplomas. In Spanish-speaking countries, you are licensed as a practitioner of whatever profession you studied. In English-speaking countries, you usually study a major and receive a degree (B.A., B.S.) that allow you to practice a profession. Some fields of study require further certification (i.e., doctor, lawyer, accountant). I prefer to translate diplomas as reflecting the degree and not the licensed profession which really does not exist as such for most majors.
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David Hollywood
Native in English
worked for int. orgs (IMF, OAS, IDB)
Native in: English
Works in: Spanish to English, German to English
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This diploma is hereby issued/conferred authorizing xxx as xxx
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a graduate in fashion design
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drexel.edu/westphal/academics/graduate/FASH/
Graduate Fashion Design. The Master's program in Fashion Design, recognized as a top 10 program in the United States and one of the top 20 in the world, ...
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bit of test missing before posting but ok now
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a graduate in fashion design
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drexel.edu/westphal/academics/graduate/FASH/
Graduate Fashion Design. The Master's program in Fashion Design, recognized as a top 10 program in the United States and one of the top 20 in the world, ...
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bit of test missing before posting but ok now
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